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title: "The \"Other World\" sentence challenge"
url: "https://www.ststephenskearsley.co.uk/blog/2020-04-24-11-45-00-the-other-world-sentence-challenge"
school: "St Stephen's Kearsley Moor CofE Primary School"
---

# The "Other World" sentence challenge

  ![Image of The "Other World" sentence challenge](https://files.schudio.com/ststephenskm/images/blog/IMG_5666.PNG)  24 April 2020   [Lyndsey Faulkner](https://www.ststephenskearsley.co.uk/blog/author/Lyndsey)   [Year 5 Blog](https://www.ststephenskearsley.co.uk/blog/category/year-5-blog)

Using the image posted on Monday and ideas generated in your own version of the story that you may have started on Tuesday try to improve these sentences. Take another look at your own story, are there opportunities to use this technique in your own work? If you would like to email your story to me you may do so on faulknerl@st-stephens-kearsley-moor.bolton.sch.uk Please remember that the learning opportunities that I am posting are just to support you. The learning activities are not intended to add to pressures at home, you are best placed to know what you and your family need in this current situation. As a school,  when we return, we will endeavour to support your child exactly at the point they are at. Everyone is doing their best but this situation is beyond everyone's experience so do not worry we've got this. Stay safe.

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